Ok, I give this song 4 stars.
Reasons are.
First. If you wanna do a trance song make it atleast 4 minutes long and make proper sections (intro, break, release, etc.). It takes alot of time but makes songs much better.
Second, try making more complicated hi hat/snare pattern (try looking in VEC libraries)
But the overall of that piece you did here is great.
~ DJ Mind Shifter